well i duno how many times i have flicked back and forth between all the above and i have come to the conclusion that the writing does seem the same...
*If its not then either tell me in person or on here - what the difference are...*
the writing seems much better on the white rather than the grey, u could try it on the black because uve used such bright bold colours might have a better effect than the grey...
did u put the black outline around the text because it was hard to read..?? u showed me b4 without the black out j.w because if this is for ur interactive piece u could leaveout the black outline on the typegraphy but keep it for the smaller writing because i remember u saying that u wanted to roll over typography u could have the black outline then when u roll over it Do u get what i mean (its much easier to explain in person but im trying here!)
My personal opinion is that with the black outline, it feels less "childlike" as i said in class, without it, i think it seems a bit crayon like? like Erica said, try it on a black background etc, keep playing around.
I like the crayon effect makes me happy on the inside, like a big pizza pie... *drools*
ANYWAY!.. i like it i think it would be good with maybe a few different fonts like maybe a handwriting one or a more blocky one so it looks like those lil wooden blox kids play with with the letters on them, you know?
also forgot to add!! reminds me of juno a little bit and the other one that guys in... no not year one.. you know the one i mean! he has a lil yellow car in it? no? ahhh well xD what I'm getting at is i can imagine that as like the credits at the start of a film all animated and flicky.
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ReplyDeletewell i duno how many times i have flicked back and forth between all the above and i have come to the conclusion that the writing does seem the same...
*If its not then either tell me in person or on here - what the difference are...*
the writing seems much better on the white rather than the grey, u could try it on the black because uve used such bright bold colours might have a better effect than the grey...
did u put the black outline around the text because it was hard to read..?? u showed me b4 without the black out j.w
because if this is for ur interactive piece u could leaveout the black outline on the typegraphy but keep it for the smaller writing because i remember u saying that u wanted to roll over typography u could have the black outline then when u roll over it
Do u get what i mean (its much easier to explain in person but im trying here!)
just a thought
My personal opinion is that with the black outline, it feels less "childlike" as i said in class, without it, i think it seems a bit crayon like? like Erica said, try it on a black background etc, keep playing around.
ReplyDeleteI like the crayon effect makes me happy on the inside, like a big pizza pie... *drools*
ReplyDeleteANYWAY!.. i like it i think it would be good with maybe a few different fonts like maybe a handwriting one or a more blocky one so it looks like those lil wooden blox kids play with with the letters on them, you know?
also forgot to add!! reminds me of juno a little bit and the other one that guys in... no not year one.. you know the one i mean! he has a lil yellow car in it? no? ahhh well xD
ReplyDeletewhat I'm getting at is i can imagine that as like the credits at the start of a film all animated and flicky.